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Beware the wrath of an Angry Penguin
by Neil Gaiman's Journal ([info]officialgaiman)
at May 12th, 2008 (10:54 pm)

I got back from Australia and realised that the Waterstones story cards were meant to have been completed and returned by last Friday. They were sent out on April 14th, but due to human error, mine didn't reach me until I was in Melbourne last week, and I didn't even look at the date, just read it hastily, went "Well, that can wait until I'm not touring Australia any longer and I'll have lots of time to think about it...".

But, I discovered, I didn't have lots of time.  I have about 24 hours, as it has to be in London at the end of the week. I looked at the card, guessed that I could fit about 250 words on it, and wrote a 250 word story (using the Pelikan flexnib that Henry Selick gave me from http://www.richardspens.com/. I'd been waiting for something to write with it, and this seemed perfect). I have two more cards, in case of disaster, and I might do a second draft tomorrow before FedEx comes. Or I may not. But I find myself, for the first time, a bit envious of Margaret Atwood and her Long Pen...


In response to your bee picture, my eleven year-old daughter said "It looks like an angry penguin." (Me)"Are you sure it doesn't look like an angry bee?" (Her)"Nope, an angry penguin."

Take care!

Gina


I love my job.

Hi!

I have a question about writing. I read your advice, and the thing is, I don't do it like that at all.

For one thing, I don't write a first draft completely, then edit it several times. I work with scenes. I write a scene, I correct it, a re-correct it, I edit it and so on. I usually have a story planned out in my head entirely, so I end up writing the scenes in any order, really, although it's mostly chronological.

I'm guessing your advice would probably be "whatever works for you", but the thing is, I don't know if it works for me. I've never finished a novel yet. Actually, my first novel (which is uncomplete) is resting right now because I met my husband, who's Canadian and couldn't speak French, and I stopped writing in French. I just though, what's the point of writing if the person I love the most can't even read it? I want him to read it /before/ everyone else, not years later.

So I started writing in English, and man is it hard. You think you're fluent in a language, and next thing you know you're struggling to find synonyms or words that have the right connotation, and your characters all speak the same way, because that's they only way /you/ speak. So I'm extremely slow.

I'm just worried that my approach might just be plain wrong, and lead me to never finish anything. I don't know who to ask for advice so I'm turning to you.

I guess my question really is, should I make sure to finish a first draft as soon as possible, even if what I write is crap and has to be rewritten later, or can I polish each piece, put them all together, then polish the result? Is it very important to have a whole to work with, and can that whole be in your head rather than written? (I always spend several months just thinking about a story for hours every day before writing it. By which I mean, that's the way I did it for the only two "real" novels I've started)

Sorry I wrote that much. Feel free to take an aspirin.

The biggest problem I can see with the way you're doing it is that it doesn't seem to give you anything finished. (If it was working for you I'd have no suggestions. There are nine and sixty ways of constructing tribal lays and every single one of them is right, after all.) The second biggest problem is that if you're writing a novel scene by scene, trying to get each scene perfect, you don't get to see how anything works when you put it all together, and that's important. A novel is more than just a sequence of scenes put side by side. It has its own rhythms, and you have to bow to them; a novel, or any long story, is something that has to work when you put the whole thing together. 

If you're being forced by the nature of what you're doing (episodic comics or serial television, or even writing a novel  at 200 words a day online or in a newspaper) to just write and hope it all works out, that's one thing.  But if you're writing a novel determined to make each scene perfect before you go on to the next, and you're writing the scenes out of order, then you're making something that's either going to work or not work when you put it all together. (That's still "write the first draft any which way".) 

But it won't excuse you from doing a second draft, because you'll get to the end, and put all the scenes together, and then you'll still have to do a second draft, if only because when you read it you notice that you've got two Wednesdays coming together, and someone's name or eye-colour changes between scenes. Or your heroine seems like a bitch, although that wasn't your intention, because you don't have a scene there that shows her humanity. Or a great scene you wrote and rewrote and honed and rewrote and polished till it shone just doesn't fit anywhere because the thing that's happening at the same time loses all vitality if you cut away from it.

I guess that's one reason I like things like NaNoWriMo -- it makes people write and finish things, helter-skelter and however. And once something's finished, you can always fix it. (The first draft of Good Omens took about 9 weeks. The second draft took MONTHS. And it wasn't until we came to rework it a little after that for the US edition that we realised that we had indeed, without noticing, created a week with two Wednesdays in it.)

Incidentally, I'm in awe of anyone who would even attempt to try to write fiction in a language not her own.

As for thinking time versus writing time, well, that's up to you. But -- and I wish it were otherwise -- books don't get written by thinking about them, they get written by writing them. And that's when you make discoveries about what you're writing. That's when you get the happy accidents. 

So think all you like, but don't mistake the thinking for the writing.

...

Remember the National Doodle Day doodles? (I talked about them at http://journal.neilgaiman.com/2008/04/q-was-this-face-that-launched-thousand.html). This just came in...

The National Doodle Day auction has begun.  Proceeds will benefit
Neurofibromatosis, Inc. (
nfinc.org). Gillian Anderson's (Scully of The
X-Files) brother suffers from NF. Click here
(
http://www.gilliananderson.ws/charities/nf.shtml) to read about
Gillian's involvement with the cause.

We have 175 doodles on the auction block including many from The
X-Files "gang":  David Duchovny, Chris Carter, Annabeth Gish, Mark
Snow (composer of the well-known X-Files theme music), Mitch Pileggi,
and various XF Alumni.

You can easily check out all the available doodles by looking at our
Doodle Guide at:
www.gilliananderson.ws/cgi-bin/news/viewnews.cgi?id=EkEpElAEEkjBVPEsLl&style=print

And it's a family affair for Gillian.  We have doodles by her sister,
Zoë, her 13 year old daughter, Piper, and Piper's Dad, Clyde Klotz who
also used to work for The X-Files.

To immediately access the eBay auction --
http://search.ebay.com/_W0QQsassZnfinccharity

Direct Links to Neil Gaiman's doodles plus his fave doodles on the
auction block:

http://cgi.ebay.com/Neil-Gaiman-Original-Doodle-1_W0QQitemZ260237234380QQihZ016QQcategoryZ58QQssPageNameZWDVWQQrdZ1QQcmdZViewItem

http://cgi.ebay.com/Neil-Gaiman-Original-Doodle-2_W0QQitemZ260237234398QQihZ016QQcategoryZ58QQssPageNameZWDVWQQrdZ1QQcmdZViewItem

Kendra Stout:

http://cgi.ebay.com/Kendra-Stout-Original-Doodle_W0QQitemZ260237933406QQihZ016QQcategoryZ58QQssPageNameZWDVWQQrdZ1QQcmdZViewItem

Cat Mihos:

http://cgi.ebay.com/Cat-Mihos-Original-Doodle_W0QQitemZ260238652157QQihZ016QQcategoryZ58QQssPageNameZWDVWQQrdZ1QQcmdZViewItem

Fred Hembeck:

http://cgi.ebay.com/Fred-Hembeck-Original-Doodle_W0QQitemZ260237233696QQihZ016QQcategoryZ58QQssPageNameZWDVWQQrdZ1QQcmdZViewItem

Sergio Aragones:

http://cgi.ebay.com/Sergio-Aragones-Original-Doodle_W0QQitemZ260237234568QQihZ016QQcategoryZ58QQssPageNameZWDVWQQrdZ1QQcmdZViewItem

Gahan Wilson:

http://cgi.ebay.com/Gahan-Wilson-Original-Doodle_W0QQitemZ260237933298QQihZ016QQcategoryZ58QQssPageNameZWDVWQQrdZ1QQcmdZViewItem


There are some other pretty nifty ones as well I'd not seen the last time I posted about it (
Simon Pegg! Robin Williams!). I was vaguely happy to notice that my first doodle, of something vaguely ifritish, seemed to be attracting more voters than the sort-of-Sandman I did next (thinking, they probably expect a Sandman).

...

This is cool, and I can't wait to read it: http://www.hardcasecrime.com/books_bios.cgi?entry=bk52

soney [userpic]
simple but yummy
by soney ([info]soney7)
at May 12th, 2008 (09:19 pm)
lazy

Mood: lazy

 
My little ones side dinner bento... carrot, blackberries, strawberries, turkey slice, brown sugar ham slice (2)
Next time I should probably cut the strawberries up to fill the spaces in between more.  I ran out =(

landofthekwt [userpic]
May -Literary Quote #2
by landofthekwt ([info]landofthekwt)
at May 12th, 2008 (10:18 pm)
Location: in Goshinboku
Mood: despair
Sound: Fade to Black by Metallica

Title: The Death of Dreams
Author: landofthekwt
Rating: PG 13 for Darkness
Genre: Angst
Universe: Canon
Word Count:313
Warning: None Inuyasha Quotes Literary Quote #2
Inspired by “Montage of a Dream Deferred” by Langston Hughes
Summary: Inuyasha reflects on his future after Kagome leaves with Sesshoumaru

      

yo, adrienne! [userpic]
Bento for 5/12/08: nuggets&pasta!
by yo, adrienne! ([info]internetnoodles)
at May 12th, 2008 (10:01 pm)
Location: Chicago
Mood: awake

packey with the bento box

What do we have here, Packey the Elephant Aragarumi? It looks like a bento box, filled with delicious food!

follow me! )

xposted (bentolunch/eat_my_bento)

Xty [userpic]
Project Completion Form
by Xty ([info]faithfulmoder)
at May 12th, 2008 (10:56 pm)

Project Title: "Wa Aristocrat Coat" (sewing a pattern from an old formal kurotomesode kimono onto a favorite old coat)
Project Start Date: Feb. 3, 2008
Planned Finish Date: None Set
Actual Finish Date: May 5, 2008 (Good thing I had none set!)
Did you make changes from original plan? Yes, I ended up not using interfacing or fabric spray underneath it mainly out of novice fear and not wanting to mess the coat up.
Did you discover something you want to share? Never underestimate how much patience you'll need to handstitch 7 feet or so of small, tiny stitches, especially when you're trying to stitch the top outer layer without getting the lining layer as well.
How happy are you with the result? 90% on appearance, 70% on quality, 100% on concept. It looks pretty much like I had imagined in my mind, though I may go back later and stitch across the back fold the one leftover edge of the pattern I now have lying around loose, so I'm happy with that! However, I'm not the most talented at embroidery so close-up my stitches aren't perfect.

By 100% on concept I mean I liked the overall result enough I may try more Meiji-era-inspired/Wa-ristocrat(?) sorts of things. The idea is to give a more mature/Aristocrat/boystyle accompaniment to Wa Lolita.

Two large-ish photos, front and back )

Dermot Mac Flannchaidh [userpic]
wall-painted animation
by Dermot Mac Flannchaidh ([info]dermotmacflann)
at May 12th, 2008 (08:47 pm)
still sick but in good spirits

Mood: still sick but in good spirits


MUTO a wall-painted animation by BLU from blu on Vimeo.

linka_lebedeva [userpic]
Olga Sherer
by linka_lebedeva ([info]linka_lebedeva)
at May 13th, 2008 (03:41 am)


Olga Sherer in Vogue Paris November 2007 by Ben Hassett
+
in Numero (june\july) 2007 By Sofia Sanchez and Mauro Mongiello

more inside )

Alex [userpic]
Random Query
by Alex ([info]antigonist)
at May 12th, 2008 (07:15 pm)

If I started posting CSS codes for livejournal layouts, would y'all be interested? I think my coding skills are about as great as my photoshop skills, at this point.

Mithrigil Galtirglin [userpic]
Not your big sister's college AU.
by Mithrigil Galtirglin ([info]mithrigil)
at May 12th, 2008 (10:10 pm)

.

Title: Rose Parlor
Author: Mithrigil
Fandom: Vagrant Story
Characters: Ashley, Heidricht, Callo, Sydney, Samantha
Rating: PG
Warnings: None!
Theme: lack of powers/real world -- Vassar College, 1965.

Done for roads_diverged (IJ).


-


Rose Parlor
vagrant story

Mithrigil Galtirglin

MONDAY MARCH 15, 1965
2:46 PM EST


A charismatic teacher is hardly cause for alarm, Dr. Heidricht. )

-

Priestess Skye [userpic]
New Challenge Fic community!
by Priestess Skye ([info]priestess_skye)
at May 12th, 2008 (09:48 pm)

After discussions with a few people, a new sainkoku challenge fic community has been opened.

This community will offer a weekly prompt that will hopefully inspire people to write fics for them. Each week we'll vote and give out banners :)

I know there is saiunkoku_fic but this one is a little different as it is challenge fics based on the prompts given each week.

Come check us out and I hope you join the fun. New prompts will be announced every friday evening. There will be ones shots, drabbles, and all pairings are welcome.


[info]saiun_challenge
 

Let's see if we can make the amount of fanfiction available grow!

Priestess Skye [userpic]
New Challenge Fic community!
by Priestess Skye ([info]priestess_skye)
at May 12th, 2008 (09:44 pm)

After discussions with a few people, a new sainkoku challenge fic community has been opened.

This community will offer a weekly prompt that will hopefully inspire people to write fics for them. Each week we'll vote and give out banners :)

I know there is saiunkoku_fic but this one is a little different as it is challenge fics based on the prompts given each week.

Come check us out and I hope you join the fun. New prompts will be announced every friday evening. There will be ones shots, drabbles, and all pairings are welcome.

[info]saiun_challenge 

Let's see if we can make the amount of fanfiction available grow!

ohlalalindsey [userpic]
by ohlalalindsey ([info]ohlalalindsey)
at May 12th, 2008 (08:29 pm)

This one is not as cute as I would like, but it gets the job done! a tuesday lunch.


a cup of steamed vegetables, two cherry tomatoes, some sliced peppers - Korean fish cake (I know, sounds gross but actually isn't), some bread and butter pickles, apple slices, a chibatta role, and a hard candy. 

Priestess Skye [userpic]
Welcome to Saiunkoku Fanfiction Challenge
by Priestess Skye ([info]priestess_skye)
at May 12th, 2008 (09:01 pm)
Tags:

( You are about to view content that may only be appropriate for adults. )

Esther-Channah [userpic]
Writing a combat training scene: Escrima versus Bo Staff
by Esther-Channah ([info]dragonbat2006)
at May 12th, 2008 (08:32 pm)

Time: Modern Day (though it doesn't really apply here)
Googled: Escrima versus Bo Staff; Bo Staff versus Escrima

Basically, I'm writing a training scene in a Batman fanfic. I've got one seasoned fighter aged 20 using escrima, while drilling a 13-year-old neophyte armed with a bo staff. My googling led me to this youtube: http://youtube.com/watch?v=TY3QXDgbqi4&feature=related which shows me how one can use the escrima to defend against an attack from a bo staff. 

I'm having less luck showing how one might use escrima on the offensive against a bo staff (or any other long weapon).

If the stats of the characters are a significant factor, the one holding the escrima is 5'10", 175 lbs, athletic but wiry and a champion acrobat and gymnast. 

The one with the staff is 5'4" and about 140 lbs, in excellent physical condition but not (yet!) olympic calibre. 

Any tips, pointers or links to youtubes that my google fu missed would be appreciated!

Thanks! 

Steph [userpic]
Bento 5 to 7
by Steph ([info]nightmare_gal)
at May 12th, 2008 (10:03 pm)
exhausted

Mood: exhausted

Still making bento lunches but forgetting to take pictures! Oh well, it's not a big loss. The ones I didn't take pictures of were exceptionally bland. Even though I'm still new to making lunch this way I've already noticed a difference in how these lunches are more filling and healthier than the lunches I was making about two weeks ago.

Teaser:

Photobucket

Please click for larger pictures and ingredients )

Nickelpin [userpic]
Jury duty = done!
by Nickelpin ([info]sekiria)
at May 12th, 2008 (05:24 pm)

After sitting and bobbing my head nearly falling asleep until 3:30pm, the defense / prosecution still couldn't be satisfied with the jury.  Over and over from 9am they kept on switching people out and I was starting to feel the butt numbing sensation that I've only ever gotten from lecture class.  Then at 4pm they suddenly called *my* name...When they started on the 10 questions and the judge heard my situation, he interrupted me halfway and he said, "Well, I'm sure you'd much rather be out there looking for a job rather than sitting here for the next four days?" and got the two attorneys to agree, and so I got out!  Woo!  Saved! 


THANK YOU, JUDGE!  I'm sorry I thought you were a jerk when you first introduced yourself!  Have a nice life!  (Until next time)

pyphoon [userpic]
aventura mall location?
by pyphoon ([info]mechamuffin)
at May 12th, 2008 (08:22 pm)
Tags:

does anyone have insider info on when the new miami store might be opening? lush customer service has no idea and i'm going a bit crazy with the waiting.

Kia Purity [userpic]
*eyes crossed*
by Kia Purity ([info]kiapurity)
at May 12th, 2008 (07:24 pm)
blah

Mood: blah

While waiting on the cookies to chill, I'm trying to restart with the transcribing of X-Men:TAS

...and the tape I pop in

...is Xternally Yours as the first episode on that tape. Sigh, now that episode won't leave me alone. *curls up and weeps*


(ps; on a good note it appears Gambit is in aptly titled "Wolverine ... and the x-men" (should've just taken out "and the x-men" entirely) ... and is wearing the classic outfit. :D)

(pps; need moar Gambit icons. I made some Gambit and Rogue icons a while ago. No idea where they WENT. Probably somewhere in Zohar that I'm afraid to touch.)

ETA: I HAVE LEARNED THAT GAMBIT BELONGS TO A GUILD KNOWN AS THE TEEVEES GUILD. ... an interesting pronouncation on "thieves" so now I'm stuck here with the mental image of them stealing tvs and stuffing 'em in the tithe to toss at the External.

Aishuu [userpic]
[May 12][Twelve Kingdoms] East Kingdoms Block Party (11/31)
by Aishuu ([info]aishuu)
at May 12th, 2008 (08:13 pm)

Title: East Kingdoms Block Party
Author: [info]aishuu
Day/Theme: May 12, "He was running out of road, he was running out of breath"
Series: Twelve Kingdoms
Character: Gyousou
Rating: PG
Notes: I've lost a day, but I'll be doing it before the month is out. So I'm still doing 31 of these suckers.

He was running out of road, he was running out of breath

incandescens [userpic]
(May 13th) (Bleach / Phoenix Wright) Order In The Court: Part XIII
by incandescens ([info]incandescens)
at May 13th, 2008 (12:32 am)

Title: Order In The Court: Part XIII
Day/Theme: 13. Deep greens and blues are the colors I choose
Series: Bleach / Phoenix Wright
Character/Pairing: Prosecuting Team, Ichigo, Renji
Rating: G

Order In The Court: Part XII )

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Compilation Order in the Court post.

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